The Pier - Comments

Oh my god.
I read this? I remember this, too. I didn't remember/realize that YOU wrote this. My God, this was honestly like the cutestestestestest thing to me. Like, seriously. Well, shit. Hot damn. I just thought you made Pat like x986039863098 more adorable than he already was, which is basically impossible and jstustjsksklfjlksjgklsjgl you slay me.

And you say I'm good?
Jesus, girl!
You're writing is amazing!
Your stuff is very visual, which I like a lot.
It's so easy to picture everything you write.
So, I'm subscribing.
Another chapter soon?

That was too cute.

“They’re like, a satellite dish full of awkward,”
haha thats funny

tooooo cute, i can't handle it! haha.

"The meal was delicious, and the conversation flowed more easily than the drops of Pepsi Pat had flicked from his straw onto Jane’s nose." - picturing this happening made me smile uncontrollably and that's weird considering i'd be utterly disgusted if i was jane!!

loved it! i like where its going!!

i'm gonna be honest here and say i don't normally read pat stories, just cause i can't take the kid seriously. but i gotta say, you write him really well!! i like it. the storyline is cute. i'm looking forward to seeing where it goes!!

COMMENT VIRGINITY!!!! I love this story<3 its adorable(: update