Another Broken Heart - Comments

punk ariel. (100)

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WOW! I just keep reading your stories over and over Beth! keep it up oh and I still miss you! lol

August 2nd, 2010 at 05:52pm

punk ariel. (100)

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Bethy I think dat u can SO pull dis off dis story iz awesome ur awesome too :D

July 11th, 2010 at 02:08am

graceful swans; (100)

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Thx for the tip. Imma trying to make it longer but its hard. :]

June 26th, 2010 at 12:55am

mgn. (100)

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Here's a tip; on a flashback, italicize the flash backk, since you said that the text msgs were in bold, then yoou put your flashback in bold, it gets a tad confusing :)
otherwise, i love it, BUT you needa make itt longer !! :D
I've subbed!

June 26th, 2010 at 12:34am

graceful swans; (100)

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Thx Jessica ii love your stories (:

June 25th, 2010 at 05:49pm

punk ariel. (100)

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Ur da best Bethany!
Remember dat!

June 25th, 2010 at 05:22pm

graceful swans; (100)

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Thx it's my first time writing a story on here(:

June 25th, 2010 at 02:11pm

mgn. (100)

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I like iit aloot!!

June 25th, 2010 at 09:00am

graceful swans; (100)

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Thank you sooo much Jesyy :] :tehe:

June 25th, 2010 at 04:22am

punk ariel. (100)

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Great story! I can imagine having someone break my heart.

June 25th, 2010 at 04:10am