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  • Angel Devastation

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    I love this story, and if you still need someone for Johnny or Zacky just let me know.
    I'm sorry I don't comment I try to read these as fast as I can but I will try to remember to comment from now on.
    More soon?
    March 26th, 2011 at 04:12pm
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    I won't read the story...
    Because if I do I will just cry...
    Don't feel bad...
    But what I will do is tell people on my avenged sevenfold story...
    I just can't read anything with jimmy in it without crying...
    So yeah
    February 6th, 2011 at 08:46pm
  • S.C.A.V.A.

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    Okay chica
    I love this!!!
    IWANTMORE PPLEASE!!!
    November 13th, 2010 at 01:16am
  • S.C.A.V.A.

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    Okay chica
    I love this!!!
    IWANTMORE PPLEASE!!!
    November 13th, 2010 at 01:16am
  • DanceEvilkitty

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    update soon
    October 28th, 2010 at 06:40pm
  • Aightball

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    This is a good story =). I can tell you've done your research! It will be interesting to see where this story goes.

    A few things I noted: try to use more description. I know it can be tough, but help us see the rooms she's in and what's around her. Also, you can describe the people around her as well.

    Something that will make her life easier during treatment: a PICC line. This is an IV inserted into the crook of the arm, held in with a couple of stitches and then protected with a sleeve of gauze when not in use. This saves her being a pin cushion every week, and can stay in as long as her treatment lasts.
    October 28th, 2010 at 03:58am
  • michelle2935

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    i love it please updete more

    So here's to you, Jimmy Sullivan.
    You were the reason we never missed a beat.
    May your double bass and blast beats rock Heaven's gates as much as our hearts.
    Rest in Peace, James Owen Sullivan.
    February 9, 1981 - December 28, 2009
    FoREVer young and free.

    "Every word Matt sings. Every beat the Rev (R.I.P.) plays. Every solo Synyster has put his heart into. Every note Johnny hits. Every rhythm that has ever come out of Zacky's guitar. Saved lives of thousands who didn't think they could make it"
    July 23rd, 2010 at 09:24am
  • XdoXuXlykXwafflesX

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    its a good story
    July 3rd, 2010 at 12:26am
  • justhannah;

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    GAH this is so beyond good so far. :D update soon!
    June 30th, 2010 at 05:22pm
  • FightnTheUrge2LuvU

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    COMMENT VIRGINITY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok i like this story already!!! im kinda shocked that no one has commented :( but u need to update! im gonna subscribe!
    June 30th, 2010 at 01:31am
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