I'm Not Forgotten. - Comments

God, I'm finding myself starting to like incest. >_<
(well, I did write a loooong incest story with both gay, straight and threesome when I was like.. 10/11 though.. It was bound to come back to me)

Really qood(:

I like this.
<3

Thank you for entering! :]

So, I liked the entire idea for this entry, but I feel like the emotion wasn't conveyed super well and it was a bit fast paced, as well as having a few grammatical errors here in there. However, the plot was definitely unique, which always gains a bunch of bonus points.

Nice job.

i would love to kiss your half-lesbian ass

i really like it! ;D
you should add some more
cause its super interesting (: