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  • SeRPieNTe'

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    you must update soon O.o pleasepleaseplease
    July 25th, 2011 at 09:16am
  • the power of justice

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    I really like the layout and banner, it's very pretty yet so simple. Everything's a perfect match, really. :3

    I like the summary, it's very intriguing and it gives a little bit away without giving too much away. The reader is able to gather that Craig was murdered, Max was in love with Craig and is left reeling with grief and shock and Ronnie falls for Max while the death of Craig is weighing down on their possible relationship.

    I liked the first chapter too, it's a good setting and nice use of descriptions :)
    July 5th, 2011 at 05:09am
  • a silent escape.

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    Uhm.. I like this. Alot <3 Update? :)

    xo; L
    June 22nd, 2011 at 04:53pm
  • AngelaSwingSet

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    You really need to update this. It's amazing. PLEASE!!! lol
    You have tons of fans already.
    February 6th, 2011 at 09:42pm
  • laddi

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    Omg please update this I'm already in love with it! Please I'm begging you!
    January 17th, 2011 at 07:52am
  • RonnieRadke

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    You should update this shit.
    Why?
    Because I said so. =D
    December 15th, 2010 at 01:09pm
  • t r i p p t y c h.

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    So, you should update because I think I'm in love with this.
    October 26th, 2010 at 01:16am
  • lacerated lullaby

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    Woow That Wasz Weird... Inna Good Wayy.??!! :)) Very Grasping Start :] Hope Yoouh Update Soon.
    July 10th, 2010 at 05:42am
  • nicholas joseph;

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    Okay, I'm back.
    I just finished.
    Okie dokie.
    SO.
    I like this.
    A lot. :D
    Ronnieeeeeeeeeeee. :3
    I wish I had a guy like him...
    >.>
    xDDDDDD
    July 2nd, 2010 at 08:52pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    I haven't even read it already,
    but I'm commenting to tell you that I'm pissed off at you.
    YOU KILLED OFF CRAIG!?
    >.<
    July 2nd, 2010 at 08:47pm
  • hoosier.

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    ugh.
    loving this so much.
    it's not even funny.
    July 2nd, 2010 at 01:12am
  • eternity.

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    This is a really, really intriguing start!
    I like it, a lot.
    Keep writing!
    (:
    July 2nd, 2010 at 12:19am
  • astro zombies

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    Woah.
    Can't wait for more!
    July 2nd, 2010 at 12:14am
  • hoosier.

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    um.
    so,
    i kinda of love this.
    July 2nd, 2010 at 12:10am
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