Three - Comments

thanking you so much!
You made me smile. I appreciate that :)

This is very well written; you do have a talent.
It's good to see another Australian writting on here. :)
I am curious on what the picture, document etc was that you based the story on.
Again, very good.

Ohmygawd.
You're an A-M-A-Z-I-N-G writer...
Just amazing.
I love that story. Love it love it love it. <3
I'll probably be back to read it again later. x3
Magnificent job.
-Bows-

hehe
thank you.

asdfghjkl. i like the way you like, put the conclusion at the beginning and the intro. at the end. it makes me excited. cause they're supposed to be there. :]!