Just Another Reason I Could Never Forget You - Comments

  • Muzik.Freek

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    Soo.....here's a rundown of how this story is going. It's at 54 pages in word, and has 23,753 words so far. How's that for "getting kinda awesome"? Yes, I made a pun. Or rather quoted an All Time Low song aha. I'm lame, I know.
    May 27th, 2011 at 09:30pm
  • Muzik.Freek

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    I'm glad both of you like it.
    jessibee::I'm having a lot of fun writing the relationship forming. But I'm having to constantly reread what I've written so far to make sure I don't make any silly mistakes like I have already.
    To both of you, I might have the next chapter up tomorrow. Maybe around 1:30 pm central time. It just depends on how much I have written tomorrow by that time. (;
    May 27th, 2011 at 05:06am
  • jessibee

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    This is super gooooooood, please continue? I really like the relationship beginning to form between zack and jerri. :)
    UPdate soon????
    May 27th, 2011 at 04:31am
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    Love it! Please update soon(:
    May 27th, 2011 at 04:04am
  • Muzik.Freek

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    Hahaha, yeahhh. I think it's very safe to say that Jericha has some really messed up thought processes sometimes. But don't worry, your charrie's gonna be around for the whole story (:

    It feels good to be writing this again ahah ♥
    May 18th, 2011 at 01:25pm
  • MissPunkRawk

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    Oh man, I died. Well at least I died with Jack by my side =)
    May 17th, 2011 at 11:18pm
  • Dezi Demize

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    I just found this story today and I seriously love it!!!
    Update soon<3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
    October 7th, 2010 at 02:09pm
  • kill your friends;

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    i really love this (: i hope her dads okayy!
    her and zack should get together their good for each other
    ;)
    September 25th, 2010 at 08:05pm
  • Muzik.Freek

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    Haha, yeahh. Mr. McCusker is actually the name of the principal of Dulaney High right now xD
    I thought it would be best to try and keep to the facts as much as possible. Which means I'm contstantly rechecking every chapter to make sure there's nothing from 2007 to now. It's a pain, but well worth it.
    And you'll have to wait and see about her dad. I am currently typing up the next chapter though (:
    September 19th, 2010 at 11:02pm
  • MissPunkRawk

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    I hope her dad's okay!
    September 19th, 2010 at 06:59am
  • MissPunkRawk

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    Totally not wasting your time!
    What a name-Mr. McCusker. Lol.
    September 19th, 2010 at 06:59am
  • Muzik.Freek

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    Bahaha, alright!
    Well, I felt like a cliffhanger was in session. So I made one.
    As for the life issue, have you tried craigslist or ebay? xD
    September 19th, 2010 at 01:48am
  • BubbleGumDrop

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    Why on earth would you stop there? I want to know if her dad makes it D:
    And you're not wasting your time because I still check up on this story to see if there is a new chapter alsmost every day(no I do not have a life, it's google's fault he couldn't find one for me)
    September 18th, 2010 at 04:28pm
  • RachelRose523

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    Your not wasting your time on this. I know I'm still reading it.
    September 18th, 2010 at 08:07am
  • Muzik.Freek

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    Well...I guess you could say that she's sick. You'll find out soon (;
    And pshh, brothers are always like that. Then again...so are best friends...hmmm
    Must be a guy thing, lmao.
    August 16th, 2010 at 09:15pm
  • Simply Ace

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    Awe, what's wrong with Jericha? Me no likey Alex jumping to conclusions...
    I thought that was the song. Last night- when I saw those lyrics- I ended up singing that verse out loud. Little did I know that my brother had heard me lol. Now he's teasing me about it :P
    August 16th, 2010 at 05:36pm
  • MissPunkRawk

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    Oh no. Is she sick or something?
    August 16th, 2010 at 02:22pm
  • Muzik.Freek

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    Manda, I was thinking the same thing lmao. I've seen Cute Is What We Aim For's singer saran wrapped by All Time Low on stage live. It was funny as hell. Band on band pranking is the shit.

    And I'm glad you like it. I've actually got a good portion of the climax written out already, simply because I had an idea for it that I didn't want to forget. And yes, number three is Josey (:
    August 16th, 2010 at 05:33am
  • Simply Ace

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    I just finished reading what you have posted so far and I really, really like this story so far! I love the whole prank war going on between her and Zack.
    As for constructive criticism, I haven't really read anything that seemed wrong to give you any &&& I just looked at your profile... is number three on your list of lyrics from Hey Monday's "Josey"?
    August 16th, 2010 at 05:18am
  • MissPunkRawk

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    We love you times infinity too!
    Man that would be a great prank. Somebody should do that during one of their shows. Is it cruel that I think that? No, what would be funny is if another band did that to ALL of them.
    And I just realized how young Zack looks in that picture on your layout from the Dear Maria video.
    August 16th, 2010 at 04:51am