This was extremely hot. Very well written and it made want to die in more ways than one. It was beautiful and Johnny was written so well. Oh it was just lovely.
Best line ever! "because Johnny doesn’t even know why himself, but he just wants a warm shower, a horror movie, and some sleep that doesn’t end with him rolling out of the bunk or being woken up by Brian’s sex dream moans." Haha, I love your writing so much, it's just incredible. I've missed your slash :)
Holy fucking shit! I'm honestly glad that you turned this in late, rather than never, because it was amazing. Lol. I don't normally read slash, but I have to say, I loved this. You wrote ncredibly good and the way you described the scenario was perfect. I didn't catch any grammar or spelling errors, which made everything just that much better! It also made me laugh at certain parts, like the lines the people above me posted, which was just a plus! (:
I could have died laughing at this, "He doesn’t ask for much, really, not compared to the drama queens he’s in a band with, and therefore, usually gets his way." Ah man, I just love to read this chapter again and again :D
Favorite line: “At least it happened, you horny little fuck..." It just made me giggle. This was lovely. It was simple and moved fast, but in a good got- to- the- fucking- point kind of way. It also helped that John was part of the pairing. He's been, like, one of my favorite people in the world lately. Oh, I just love your writing. (:
Favorite part/line "...Or being woken up to Brian's sex dream moans." Yeah, you already know this cause I told you. I definitely LOL'd at this. Oh my god. I don't know why but that was the funniest shit ever. I'm laughing once again just reading it. Bahahaha. :)
All in all, hot tub sex is kiiiinky. Loved it nonetheless. ;D