The way you've written this (with the myths) is really creative and intriguing, and the conversational tone gives it a bit of edge. So, you've just ticked three boxes in my good-story criteria :) Can't wait for more!
P.S. Thanks for reading and commenting on my story ^_^
I really like your story. It actually has a good plot and well written and edited words. Unlike many other stories it isn't like 'I was kidnapped by a vampire and now have an arranged marriage to him but his brother loves me and I love his sister' or something stupid like that. I hope that you keep writing.
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