So sorry I didn't comment sooner. It just slipped my mind. Anyways, I thought this was really great. The power of memories is amazing. You really made that apparent in this. I loved the emotions running throughout it. The tone was also perfect, since it was her nightmare afterall. It wasn't boring at all, but instead very captivating. I really enjoyed it. Thanks! :D
P.s. I still feel kinda special knowing yer first story on here was for my contest. lol
Anyways, I thought this was really great. The power of memories is amazing. You really made that apparent in this. I loved the emotions running throughout it. The tone was also perfect, since it was her nightmare afterall.
It wasn't boring at all, but instead very captivating. I really enjoyed it. Thanks! :D
P.s. I still feel kinda special knowing yer first story on here was for my contest. lol