Hahahahaha- good one. [: And it doesn't say why Mrs. Weasley wasn't around.
September 17th, 2013 at 06:55am
Here we go:
5/10 for grammar/spelling
-There were a couple instances of tense confusion, but mostly it was my pet peeve, the quote comma rule. Remember, it's "I get annoyed when people don't follow it," said I, not, "Don't do this." I said.
9/10 for a readable layout
-The background was a tiny bit distracting, but overall, it was very neat and easy to read.
30/30 for relevancy to the title
-Completely relevant :D
47/50 for originality/creativity
-I felt maybe it could have been more descriptive, but otherwise, it was awesome. All the chaos that happened was pulled off well, and the ending was what really made it halarious. Good job :]
Overall:
91/100
Awesome job!
