July 20th, 2012 at 06:34pm
Save Your Heart - Comments
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The way you write always keeps me so intrigued! I love this story and I love you! :DJanuary 8th, 2012 at 07:19am
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Wah <3 Love it!!(:
See, and now I want another update xDDD
The Scene was great(: [/Perv comment]
Update soon! <3March 8th, 2011 at 02:01am -
umm can we we say HOT AS FUCK?!?!?
i love that you have the power to convert me to a Zacky girl;)February 28th, 2011 at 02:46am -
I loved it! You are an amazing writer hun, I always look forward to your updates. More soon please! :)February 24th, 2011 at 01:10am
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Nicole, I am going to marry you and your amazing stories. This one is just as amazingly amazing awesome (insert a million other adjectives like awesome here) like oh my god. how are you so amazing, seriously? I loved this so much. you're an amazing author, I hope you know that, and I love your stories very much.
update soon please <3.
Love you~February 23rd, 2011 at 07:44am -
oh my god, chapter four (OMFGCHAPTERFOURLMFAO) ahem, anyways, oh my god, dude it made me bawl. it was so sad... oh my god, just wow.February 23rd, 2011 at 07:10am
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Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit.
No comment... ;DFebruary 23rd, 2011 at 12:08am -
Gena fucking deserved to be cheated on!!!February 22nd, 2011 at 05:02pm
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Oh darlin, you were right when you said it was sexy as fuck ;)
Great update babe :)
I shall be havin some naughty dreams about Zacky Vee tonight ;)
Lol I loooove youuu <333333February 22nd, 2011 at 04:56am -
Loved it! Just like I always do haha. Great job hun, can't wait for more! :)December 12th, 2010 at 06:46am
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Update? :)December 4th, 2010 at 06:43pm
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Um ... are they gonna have sex???
That's just what Zacky needs!!
Can't wait to read more!!December 1st, 2010 at 06:22am -
Hahaha, oh Matt xDDD
Update was awesome(:
Haha, update soon!!(:November 20th, 2010 at 08:42pm -
haha oh wow so you know how they say you learn something everyday? i did right now and it was possibly the greatest lesson of all. MATT DOESNT HAVE A VAGINA. lol! xD
love this but i'm crying a little since I read the comment i left for last chapter:/November 19th, 2010 at 04:10am -
I want more now. Not soon, now. :DNovember 19th, 2010 at 12:14am
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teeheee i loved the matt part. so great. and hmmm i wonder whats going to happen o.0 :]November 18th, 2010 at 11:40pm
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Damn he's got it bad. XD Loved the update! More soon.November 18th, 2010 at 08:07pm
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Soo sorry it took me so long to comment on this! Aww such a sad chapter but I loved it! Your really good with emotions hun. More soon please :)October 18th, 2010 at 01:41am
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Wait, did I already comment on this one...?
Ah well.August 23rd, 2010 at 03:49pm
I really enjoy this story. From start to where it's at now you compile a great writing style as well as characters. The lust between her and Zacky is felt throughout and I like that you didn't just have it with him. I like that you showed the other boys, through Matt's confession, having a little problem as well. And I like that like "But I'm not willing to leave Val for her." and how he calls Zack out!
His relationship with Gena has an actual reason for collapsing which is might I add very nice. A lot of times people just put a problem there and call it a day, but you're showing the collapse and his mind wandering nicely. I can't wait for Gena to come home tomorrow. ;D
There were a few grammar mistakes, non I'll pinpoint out, but all in all your writing is very nice. You balance between description and spoke word well and I'm glad you know how to space everything out properly. The text flows beautifully and you pick words that not only fit the moment because of their meaning but also because of the way they sound. Which is profound, and I don't know if you think about it, but it's something writers really should focus on.
All in all this was amazing! I can't wait for more of it, and I'm a big Zacky lover myself.