Notice Me Now? - Comments

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i like it

well, i freakin' love Spirit, no joke, i smile the whole time in both his chapters, so sarcastic and...well, wont lie, he reminds me of myself>=)
and Skylar? well, he's very...hyper. kinda cute, although there's only one chapter in his p.o.v. hmm....i like this a lot=D
update soon?

First chapter and I already like it! :D Keep it!

I like it!
Especially since his name is Spirit. I've never ever ever met someone with that name!
.... Well I don't think I have?
Is the next chapter gonna be in the other dudes pov? Sorry, I don't really remember his name!
Hahahahah I am subscribing!
Oh, and juss to tell you, I leave really long comments, but this one isn't that long cuzzz I'm tired

Awh... I wanted to steal the comment virginity... anyways, I really like it!
Keep it and update!

Imma steal ur comment virginity to say this is interesting and very good so far!! Update soon?