Somewhere Out There - Comments

Very brilliant! :) I like it. Very awesome, brilliant and creatively written as well. :)

I thought this was beautiful. The emotion was so well done in such a short amount of words.
I also like how the emotion changes from the beginning to the end. Well done. :]

For something so short, you managed to convey a lot of emotion. I especially loved the part with the labyrinth and the thread.

I noticed one little mistake- should somewhere out there are the stars are waiting be somewhere out there the stars are waiting?

Overall, great job. I really enjoyed this. :)

I thought this was really well written. You could feel the pain in the beginning, and the hope rise in the end. It really told the story and meaning of the song great! I liked it!
Thanks for your entry! :D