Coloring Outside The Lines - Comments

I love this so far. <3

Update, update, update! :D

Wow....This is amazing so far.
More soon please :)
<3

I settled on picking at a raisin bagel, my stomach growling in protest for something more. With my legs dangling down from my spot on the kitchen counter I let my sight zone out to my thoughts and imagination as they took over.

I loved this bit, because the way you write, I can always picture everything so damn perfectly. (:
I'm excited to see where this story goes!

Aww he couldnt get anything really written..
update soon please..?
:)

I'm actually really interested in where you will go with this.
But no matter where you take it: it will be wonderful.
I adore everything you write.

Poor boy didn't go through with the letter though. D:
But he will tell Gaven right?

Update honnie bunnie.
<3

Okay, I swear, you're my new favourite author on here.
Every word and sentence, you just put everything together so perfectly.
It really flows.
And, the idea of this sounds amazing.
Can't wait for the next chapter! (:

story caught my attention and wont let go...haha must read more! :)

This sounds really good.
Mooore please?

What are you talking about?
I adore this. ^....^
Make more more more honniebunnie.
XD

Update please!!(:
I love slashes.
xx

Ah, I like this its very.....hmm descriptive, scratch that, I love it.
Update
-Love Kit<3