July 11th, 2011 at 12:29am
Brilliant Lies - Comments
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I was wondering if you guys gave up on this story because I have not.June 25th, 2011 at 06:06pm
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Update soon please!! I love this story! It's amazing and keeps me wanting more. I love both the girl's realtionships with the Cullen's but for some reason I really really want to see Tobi and Jasper get together sooooon. They were so cute <3 I love that he has to use so much control and still wants to be with her. Update soon please!!!!!
:DJune 21st, 2011 at 10:11am -
OH. SHIT. The last link didn't work, by the way- the [url] didn't have a closing bracket in the front. I LOVE how Grayson and Ruby are Stefan and Elena- it just makes things SO much easier to picture. And please, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't let them get back together- the stupid motherfucking leeches do NOT deserve them! They should pay for the rest of their sorry undead lives for what they did; Ruby should take Tobi's lighter and a pretty little bottle of hairspray and TORCH THEM TO ASHES! And Bella....oh don't even get me started on the pathetic filthy waste of space- I HATE her, UGH she disgusts me, completely and utterly REVOLTING! And Jacob's a freaking dumbass for liking her too...just...lawfjlsdjf.
There's a broken link in chapter 4 too, for Ruby's room- it doesn't exist, apparently. I really love Grayson- my heart would break (his too, I'm sure) if Ruby left him. It's bad enough that the deserving male doesn't get the girl in Vampire Diaries- must we really repeat this here too?!
I absolutely love how Tobi cuts with her words now- Heaven knows Edward, Rosalie and everyone deserves it. And Ruby's speech to Alice, so. damn. true. Oh yeah- list of things to do to Bella!
1. Give her a swirlie. Yes, flush her down the damn toilet where she belongs.
2. Make her eat sh*t. Maybe it'll tone up her complexion- she's altogether far too pale.
3. Slam her front face into a wall and make her bleed. Maybe that'll give her a bit of expression. A face, so to speak.
4. Kill her? Smack her? Oh! Sell her to Luke. Mwahahahahaha!
I like Paul...I always have, but he's not that particularly heartwarming here. Nasty ex is gross, needs to get his ass kicked and burned. Clarice...is obviously Tobi's mother, though she doesn't have to be so cougarish/pedophile about it. That is, indeed, very creepy. Glad Tobi got over her bad phase and has developed character. I'm not sure if I want D (the bad nasty ex whose name I can't currently remember because it's 6:49 in the morning and I've been reading the prequel and sequel for the past who-knows-how-many-hours) to beat the shit out of Jasper and Emmett- because while I'm itching for that to happen, I don't quite like him either. He's a bit of a creep, if you know what I mean.
UPDATE! I love the story and I love the two main characters- even if they are stupid and immature at times. <3June 7th, 2011 at 03:50pm -
Omg, I don't know the last time I commented!! Sorry about that, but I just caught up on all the last few chapters and I hope you update again reallllll soon! Ugh, damn Dalton! I wonder what Ruby's gonna do about Emmett...I would really love to see them together! & I love Tobi & Jasper....hmm, maybe I'm biased cause I prefer vampires to werewolves? Lol, oh well. Can't wait for the next update!May 4th, 2011 at 08:13pm
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Dalton is my favorite villan :D he's just... perfect for the role.
Oooh, look at Emmett being all romantic ;)April 26th, 2011 at 12:39am -
Oh my gosh! I hate Dalton. Shouldn't Alice have had a vision of what happened?April 19th, 2011 at 09:57pm
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DANG it stopped when it got immense :DApril 10th, 2011 at 02:41pm
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I'm probably one of CharmedLuna's biggest fans from quizilla and to see more of her work oon here I am in love with your work all over again. Crazy, how I just 'stumbled' across this story, right? But I don't believe in coincedences, only inevitability. So I'm positive there's a reason this story came on my radar. Now on an honest tip I also love SimplySosa's work now that I've had the pleasure to actually read some.
I can't even pick who's my favorite out of Tobi and Ruby because they both are amazing and then they both can be extremely fucked up in the head. Lol. But you have to love them. I do know that with every fiber of my being I despise Dalton.
Let him burn, please.
I want Tobi to forever stay with Paul and for Ruby to not eff over Grayson.
It'd be kinda cool if a lesbian sex scene was thrown in the mix. Jk Jk...or am I? Lmao
But some kinda twist in the plot would be awesomeness, no lie.April 7th, 2011 at 07:49am -
Dun DUn DUn is so right
O_O!April 4th, 2011 at 07:41pm -
noooooooooo he better not hurt her :( omg i cant wait for more!!April 3rd, 2011 at 07:39am
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Holy shit!
That was amazing.April 3rd, 2011 at 12:49am -
love it! but why do the girls need to being a little wench's! write more as soon as you can!April 2nd, 2011 at 06:32pm
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:O
I hope Emmett saves her <3
please update soon! <3
=]April 2nd, 2011 at 04:49pm -
can anyone say.......CLIFFHANGER! I hate Dalton, lets hope Emmett saves her <3April 2nd, 2011 at 03:46pm
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love it write more as soon as you can!March 14th, 2011 at 08:28pm
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i agree :)
Tobi and Paul are such a cute couple <3<3
They better last for a long time though!
I don't want see what a heartbroken Paul is like... </3
please update soon! :D
=]March 13th, 2011 at 05:54pm -
Tobi and Paul are so cute :D
But I don't know how much longer they're gonna last.... :/March 13th, 2011 at 04:57pm -
teehee loved the update :D ty!!March 13th, 2011 at 08:14am
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Freaking awesomely fantastico!March 5th, 2011 at 01:38am
Please let us know what is happening. I miss this story :(