Baby Girl is a brand new story - 2017. the comments below are pertaining to an old story i wrote back in the day. the title is now different, plot is different, characters are different, layout is different, everything is different. i just used the same 'story homepage' from an old story that i was writing years ago :)
i think maybe u shud rewrite it because it does have good potential but i was surprised when kendel dint try and runaway agin like straight away, but anyway carry on with it please?
I liked it you should definitely continue. I did catch a few spelling errors but nothing major. Also I believe you can get banned for posting an authors note as a chapter. Let me know if you continue this... I don't check my email... ever =]