Things Could Be Better, but They Could Be a Whole Lot Worse - Comments

I loves you Dannie. The plotline's good.
Tell me if you need any help on it, right?

August 20th, 2010 at 07:01pm

you should probably space out the paragraphs a bit more, but i like the storyline so far (:

August 19th, 2010 at 10:36pm

you should probably space out the paragraphs a bit more, but i like the storyline so far (:

August 19th, 2010 at 10:36pm

loveeee(:
update?

August 9th, 2010 at 01:20pm

this is quite good(:
i think somethings gonna backfire...her being his cousin and stuff.
but i'm stoked to see what happens(:

August 3rd, 2010 at 10:36am

I <3 this.

August 2nd, 2010 at 09:27pm

fail, I didn't get first comment
<3
Love it though

July 31st, 2010 at 10:57pm

I like it, I'm a bit confused, but
you should keep going.

I think this'll be good

July 31st, 2010 at 10:56pm