Stricken - Comments

this story is brilliant, you have to write another Lost Boys story!!

Awesome ending! :D

Wow I just came across this. I love The Lost Boys one of the best movies EVER! This is awesome I've been trying to find more stories like this for a while now. Keep up the good work!

I really, really liked this chapter. alot. it was great :) cant wait for more. and i'll be sad when it's done too

Great Update!!!!
Can't wait for more!!
And secretly hoping David and Zara can fly off into the sunset and live happily ever after! haha

ohh.. am liking this story please keep it up x <3

Very brilliant, intriguing and creative! :) I like it so far. :)
Update as soon as you can, please. :)

I really liked this chapter, even if you did write in quickly. Its pretty damn good :)

deserving love! you updated so u deserve it :) i like reliving things from a movie in a different way. <3

This is awesome!!!!
First Lost Boys fanfic I've read, and it was reallly good!!
Have you seen the other Lost Boys movies? You could get inspiration from those....the second one was ok, the third one honeslty was terrible. But still good to look into for inspiration!!

oooooooh steamy. haha. i cant wait for the next updage :D

i love this you need to update soon... i love writing lost boy fan fics to... i have Lost In the Shadows right now.... hope you get through the writers block soon.

You know what? I love this.
It's been ages since I've read a good Lost Boys fic and this one doesn't seem to hold back too much or take itself too seriously.
Please continue, my love. Oh, and it's Sookie. I just changed my username. :)

no need to make it like the movie, it is practically your own...only fan fic...haha. oh wells, its all goooood.

Omg I loved it. I hope it's the art where she gets to see them feed!

awh, schuchs, no need to mention me. im just hear to read and support :D <3

I'm loving it! I can't wait for the next chapter!

That was awesome keep going

loved it :]

loved it.keep writing.i want to know what happens next.