Choke Me. - Comments

So, I'm going to take you through my faces whilst searching for some good waycest.

): <- That was my face when I was endlessly going through the lists of waycest

\: <- This was me when I saw yours in the list

(: <- That face was once I read the description and started reading it

=DDDDDDD <- Andddd that was me when I finished reading!

Haha, but on a serious note, this was extremely well written and I loved every word of the entire thing. (AndwewontmentionthatIfindchokingextremelysexyandaturnon) This was great!

Just thought i'd drop you a comment saying I loved it, I was looking for a quick hot piece of Waycest and I certainly found it, thank you!

Haha, ChokeMe read Choke Me. (Sorry... she sent me here anyway XD)
So good. I am not wanking right now, I promise.
*subtly has hand down pants*
Awesome. I like. I love asphixipfiliac (sp) Gerard. *makes mental note to write own - for own pleasure*

Um. Whoa? Mikey's personality was very well developed and I really enjoyed reading this. I like the fact that you have written about something that most people don't write about; also, how you have made Mikey more dominant, which is a rare occurence in a Waycest.

So I haven't read Waycest in a long time... but I saw this on the Pimping and Reccing thread and gave it a shot... and loved it. This was some good ol' fashioned smut and I like the twist you gave on it. Mikey's personality was also really well developed, which is good, because he's my favorite MCR member. :)

Also, that last line was perfect. I really liked this.

I'm too sick for my own good, but so are you for writing this ;P

i remember this, you little sneak. (:

You like writing sexual fantasies lol
But that's what makes your writing different and way better than everyone else's.
You go the extra mile where normal writers fear to go.
Love itttttt :)

huh, this was, interesting? and yet strangely entertaining.

I also really liked how you used the word "euphoria" in your entry.
Having Gerard say it at the end was clever,
and comical in a way.
The word was definitely conveyed in your story.

Well, props on writing an original story!
I never thought I'd get an entry about this particular subject.
It was defiintely an interesting and...er, colorful read?
Hahaha.

This was very well written.
I liked how the point of view switched easily between Mikey and Gerard.
Oftentimes, authors have trouble with that transition, and you pulled it off cleanly, and nicely.
Well done there.
I also really liked the layout, it's darkness reflected the mood of the story, in my opinion.
I didn't spot any spelling or grammar issues, so THANK YOU for prood reading.
That always gives brownie points!

For some reason, I really liked this line:

"Mikey moved from the doorway, gently shutting the door behind him, and walked over to his brother, kneeling down beside him. Gerard curled further into himself, ducking his head down, wishing he were a turtle; that way he could bury himself inside his shell and never come out."

Nicely done.

Thank you for getting your entry submitted in time.
Good luck in the contest!<3
Results should be posted some time tomorrow.

woa... scary, but also really good!
keep it up :)