Somehow Saving You - Comments

Chapter 14: Of all the places to get a tattoo, she had to choose one of the most painful spots! She's got guts, I'll give her that lol
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did not expect that!

I'm back! ..Again.
I was in Norway, hence the lack of comments..
But uhm - amazing!!
Yeah, I still love it. :)

Ohh!! That Bitch just about got a beat down!
Hahahha! That is some funny shit!
Go Cat! Beat her Ass!!!
Did that rhyme?????
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Ah, very much enjoying this. You have a beautiful flow and you're characters are all nicely rounded, and they're not at all unbelievable, it just.. works. :)

I think the only problem I've had with this, is the baby thing. I don't know if you were planning to do something with it, but no-one gets over a miscarriage with a few stray tears, even when they didn't know they were pregnant. I also don't think it realistic that Brian would just shrug it off. For me it was definitely an emotional part of the story, because it happened whilst my mum was pregnant with me and the only reason I'm still here is because she went through a successful emergency surgery despite me being two months early. I just think there are so many loose ends there. All of that said, you could have something planned so this is more me questioning as to if you do.

The other thing I think would help this story is some more description, it just seems as if as soon as everything has a colour, what it looks/sounds/feels like doesn't matter. I'm pretty biased as description is probably the thing I'm best at, but I do think a little more would be nice.

However as I said, your flow and characters are beautiful and that layout it simply stunning. I adore it. Overall, I love it and I'll be subscribing. I can't wait to see how this turns out, good job! :D

i really wanna kill that girl -_-

dude i would totally beat that whore in the face if she had the nerve. >:[ no one should ever act like that to someone that jimmy was so close to GRR. but yeah anyways. love the story [:

Chapter 13: That girl had no right to be a bitch to Cat but right fuckin on to Cat for standing up for herself!!!! :DDD
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Chapter 12: HAHAHAHAHAHA XD I love the little notes Brian left for her! That was funny ;P

i love this story!!,
i subscribed:)

yay yay yay!
Brian and Cat remind me off me and my best friend!
mwhahah! but we did not nor do have sex with each other!
hahahha....maybe..hahha jk!
please update!
and omg is Cat going to like...completly block everyone out?
like she's going to act all fine and what not and then completely break down?!?!

So....i totally cried!
i know i said it would be better for her to be
pregnant...but i changed my mind!
i hope her and Brian have another baby!
that was sooooo freaking sadd!
Gosh!
I love you and your stories!

GAHH! i WAS soo CLOSE to the answer!
its always pregnant :( PEOPLE NEVER GET CANCER THESE DAYS :( well... not that i want them to or anything :|
its kinda sad though. to loose a baby you never even knew about :[ i hope things turn for the better for her and Brian :} lovely chapter btw :D

woooahhh
thats crazy!
& so sad
poor thing
I hope she doesn't get too upset...or crazy or anything
loove it!

Chapter 11: Ah man....poor Cat ):

Omg! Dont tell me she has CANCER! NOOOO
I will absolutly freak out and cry!
Maybe she was pregnant and the baby is like...dying????
but then they'll be able to save it?!?!?!
please dont let it be cancer! please please please!

Yay! Im just now reading it cause i didnt get an update reminder :/
But yay! Her and Brian! *Squeals*
So like....you have to update! now now now!!!

i thought jimmy wasn't going to talk to her but thank god he came back. i just laughed when jimmy had a disgusting face on since cat vomited because i can imagine what his face would look like.

well, i think it would be nice to let the guys now about cat seeing jimmy and i know it will be hard for them to believe. cat should ask jimmy to try and move things around. i think she might be pregnant? idk but i hope you get to update soon because i really love this story.

i know that in the end of the story you will probably decide it's time for jimmy to head in to the light and i have to say it will be sad because we all really love him even though we never met him.

so yeah, i hope this is the kind of comment/suggestion/idea that you wanted!

Poor thing is getting sent back to the hospital. HAHA. And Jimmy's back. YAY!!!
Loved the update! it didnt suck!

awww pooor thing
looved it!