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  • Rose Fairy

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    Title

    Sweet and simple <3

    Layout

    Pretty and I love the flowers

    Summary

    There isn't much of one =\

    Story

    1: Aww, this is very amazing. I loved how the last line 'And then I woke up.'

    2: I like the mention of the color blue and how it symbolizes something for her. =)

    3: Haha, this one is creepy-ish, but in a weird sort of funny way. Lol (Did that make any sense? XD )

    4: Wow, this one really made me stop and think. It's what everyone in life feel, at one point or another.

    Overall

    You are a very talented writer! I loved all four although my favorite is tied between 1 and 4. Grand job and keep writing!

    Forever&Always,
    <3Rosetta<3
    August 18th, 2010 at 02:35am
  • Lizzie Borden.

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    I love the layout! It’s so simple, yet beautiful! The black really makes the yellow in the flower pop!

    Drabble One:
    I love the environment you created. I was so at peace, I felt like I was walking through the park, seeing all these things happening!

    Drabble Two:
    Symbolism steals my heart, every time. Beautiful!

    Drabble Three:
    I could really feel the obsession and the familiarity you created. I can totally see the stalking thing.

    Drabble Four:
    Very philosophical. I feel it talks a lot about life and our journey. Stunning.
    August 17th, 2010 at 04:00am
  • Jackalope Crossing

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    Thanks, guys. I appreciate it a lot. :)
    August 17th, 2010 at 12:07am
  • Patty Lovell

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    I love the third one, I dunno, I love reading about stalkers.

    Their all good though. You are an unbelievable writer and I think you'll go very far. ^_^
    August 16th, 2010 at 11:56pm
  • Mikey James Way

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    That was awesome. I think drabble one was my favorite.
    It reminds me of the dreams I have,,, and then I wake up to my boring and almost miserable life Dx
    August 16th, 2010 at 10:20am
  • EverRose

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    Awesome. You m'dear are filled with awesome. I agree with everyone else. You got skills.

    I think my favorite was the second. For drabbles theyre quite amazing

    :}
    August 16th, 2010 at 07:30am
  • Jackalope Crossing

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    ^^ Thanks. :)

    ^Thank you! I think that's my favorite, too. I know what you mean about the shortness; when I'm writing them it's hard to make them 100 words, but since it's a drabble I have to. It's hard to stop myself from going off on a tangent in the middle and making it longer. Thanks again. :)
    August 16th, 2010 at 06:45am
  • vfgfgjhgfdsfds

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    These were really beautiful. I have to say second was my favorite. It felt both light and dark, and there was amazing embroidering in your writing. "She tried to look to the sun and throw light on the blue lacquer, but the darkness lingered." hit me the most. I was sad that it was such a quick read - I mean, there is nothing wrong with that by ANY means - it was just very lovely and I didn't want it to end.
    August 16th, 2010 at 06:25am
  • Dim witted fool

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    I have to say my favorite one was the third, just something about that one,
    I love a lot.
    But like everyone else has said, you wrote these so beautifully.
    You have amazing drabble writing skills, keeping writing dear (:
    August 16th, 2010 at 05:27am
  • Jackalope Crossing

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    I appreciate it! I'm glad you liked it, because I love to write it. :)
    August 16th, 2010 at 03:13am
  • turducken

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    Your drabble writing skillage is amazing.
    The first one has that flowy flowery descriptions thing going with it, and the other two include that but also have a deeper meaning and stuff.
    The third one was my favourite, just because "but I swear I saw you wave when they dragged me away".
    -Favourite.
    :D
    In the second though, I think you meant blue instead of blues at the end.
    August 15th, 2010 at 05:30pm
  • Jackalope Crossing

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    Thanks again, so much. You guys are fantastic. :)
    August 15th, 2010 at 03:57pm
  • silk tea.

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    I have to agree with jackyln. this was exquisite.

    Your dribbles are superb, I'm actually rather jealous of your drabblewriting skills. >.<
    Very incredibly job, I don't really have anything intelligible to say which is kind of sad.
    But then again you should feel good that for once I have zero clue what to say.
    August 15th, 2010 at 07:30am
  • eternity.

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    HOLY FRACK.
    You are so effing talented!
    I'm sorta speechless. You just wrote everything so beautifully. <3
    The third one gave my heart a squeeze. [:
    Wonderful job! I definitely want to read more of your drabbles!
    <3
    August 13th, 2010 at 09:34pm
  • Jackalope Crossing

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    Thanks so much! I really appreciate it. :)
    August 13th, 2010 at 06:33am
  • cosmicanparo

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    omg first comment! yay and i love ur short stories keep it up
    August 13th, 2010 at 06:26am