August 18th, 2010 at 02:35am
I love the layout! It’s so simple, yet beautiful! The black really makes the yellow in the flower pop!
Drabble One:
I love the environment you created. I was so at peace, I felt like I was walking through the park, seeing all these things happening!
Drabble Two:
Symbolism steals my heart, every time. Beautiful!
Drabble Three:
I could really feel the obsession and the familiarity you created. I can totally see the stalking thing.
Drabble Four:
Very philosophical. I feel it talks a lot about life and our journey. Stunning.
Sweet and simple <3
Layout
Pretty and I love the flowers
Summary
There isn't much of one =\
Story
1: Aww, this is very amazing. I loved how the last line 'And then I woke up.'
2: I like the mention of the color blue and how it symbolizes something for her. =)
3: Haha, this one is creepy-ish, but in a weird sort of funny way. Lol (Did that make any sense? XD )
4: Wow, this one really made me stop and think. It's what everyone in life feel, at one point or another.
Overall
You are a very talented writer! I loved all four although my favorite is tied between 1 and 4. Grand job and keep writing!
Forever&Always,
<3Rosetta<3