I Can Taste the Failure - Comments

uhm, i don't get why holley freaked out on him? o:
but chelsea sounds like a bitch, i don't like her.
and oli's still an ass and i love him(':
keep up the amazinnnng work :D

This shit is killer. :) Love this like no other.

Hollllyyyyy ballllsss. Imm subbing. No questions askes. Just am

Hot ;)

wow, i LOVE this!
like, seriously. your writing style is absolutely amazing.
you have such a way with words. they all flow together so well.
and oh my god, i just love the way you portray oli. it's like.. exactly how i imagine him to act.
i can NOT wait to read more of this story((:
i'm suuuuuper excited for an update :'D

Love it

Love the story so far [:

awesome story so far :D

Also, I love the way you portray Oli...
I just love it!

I like this story!!
You should deff update again!

I'm liking this so far. I like Holley's character. Keep it up :)

like it a lot!

Back again! haha.
I really like this story, it's different to the other more cliche stories! And I really like your writing style, and how Oli is not a massive douche, but still showed he was annoyed when he didn't 'get any'. haha! Great story so far! xx

Hello there, I stumbled across your story in my Oli-searchings, haha, and I must say that this is a really good story! It has totally captivated me and I think that it has a lot of potential to go somewhere great!
I never know what to say on these things, so forgive me if I sould like a tosser, haha. But I really like this story, the characters and the plot are already different and significantly better than a lot of stories out there! Anyway, i'm off to subscribe! Can't wait to see where this goes! xx

Comment Virignity. I liked the story so far. I'm a little confused though is she his probatation officer? Well anyways you're a great writer. I'll be reading!XD