:O Okay, I rarely say this and I hope this doesn't upset you, but that was such a sad, borderline half-assed ending! Lik.....I really liked the story up to the last chapters! :'( I really do hate saying that, but there's your constructive criticsm. It was really rushed and there was like no emotion involved with the end. *Seriously I'm like wincing as I write this, I feel so bad) But, in another view, I guess not all stories end with something happy! Congrats on the wonderful story, though! :)
Ok, so basically you want me dead? I started saying like WHAT THE FUCK WHAT THE FUCK JOHN WTF when I read what he did. EVERYTHING WAS PERFECT! I do agree with Kinley's choice tho. Being cheated on is an awful way to break up but when it happens, there is no more coming back. Ive never been cheated on but I did it to one of my boyfriends and it sucked. I think LOVE, the true one (I thought that john truly loved her...) always stands up against everything. Against temptations like that, you know? I really want to know what happens next. Im so excited for the sequel!! And Dirk Mai *-* he is HOT! Cant wait to read the new story :) Good job hun!as always!!!!I know Im repetitive but it's true, this story is great! <3333
Oh.MY.DEAR.MOTHER.OF.GOD. Do you know that I had to read twice the end of the chapter cause of the name I read in it? I MEAN I AM YOUR NEW COWORKER? THAT'S INSANE! This made me the happiest person EVER! John is such a love <3 I WANT HIM AS A BOYFRIEND huiwerfhuwehufhuw. And did I ever tell you that I love the fact that you post the outfit for Kinley everytime you say that she is dressing up? In that way I imagine her more you know. It's awesome. And I cant wait for the sequel (great title btw). Let's see what happens with 'me' around. AND! Kinley is right, she's too young to get married and have babies. John is mature but being a dad and a husband is though, especially when young. They have time for that!:) Great job as always <3 (I talk too much AHAH)
OOOOMMYYYYYGOOOOD! Kinely and John could like have sex EVERYWHERE AHAHAH. Mmm why Garrett is trying to break them apart? What does he know? Night movies...I love them! A lot of things can happen when the light is off....for example, in this case, John trying to seduce Kinley (and he did it good apparentely :p). Soooo 20 chapters uh? Well of course I will looking forward to the new story :) It will be hard for you to get rid of me LOL :) Good as always, the sex part are so HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGG!!! And when I read John using his teeth to undo Kinley's jeans, while he was still staring at her (that sinful stare.....) I was like OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!John is a sex machine ready to reload :p Cant wait for the next part!!!! <33333333
I just read everything you've written so far and I want more. :D Now, I need to go and stalk some pictures of John on tumblr cause I miss him. Not miss him. I've never met him. But I miss him. Yeah >.<
1) THE PUPPY. I love dogs, you dont know how much I love them and my dog is basically my life. 2) JOHN WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU? A baby???? O_O I was like stoked when I read it! Im sure he loves Kinley but they are too young!!! 3) I'd go with Kennedy??O_O Im even more concerned!What is going oooon? 4) Awwwwww you dedicated this to me...Im too happy!!Thank you honey!I love you! 5) I love this story sfm you cant even imagine. 6) I sort of envy Kinley. 7) Johno is the perfect guy. 8) I like Garrett and Kinely's friendship. Poor Garrett with a broken heart :( 9) Can't wait for the next part, I love the fact you update really fast! 10) I LOVE YOU!