Not A Ghost Or A Stranger - Comments

MCRLUCY (100)

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Please continue this, it's so intriguing. The title is just fine as it is. I look forward to reading more.

April 25th, 2008 at 01:21pm

geraldine. (100)

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You totally should continue,
with this.
It seems to be very good,
and you writing style is very good.

(:

April 9th, 2008 at 09:32pm

BlueBird. (100)

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haha I can picture the outfit all too easily.
and yay for green eyeshadow, or bright eyeshadow in general.
Please continue.

January 9th, 2008 at 07:03pm

Bite me? (100)

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You should really continue this, it's interesting =]

January 2nd, 2008 at 05:49pm

Sheepy (115)

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I liked it. I'd be interested as to what comes next, anyway.

I was a bit confused by the fact you mentioned the air-con in the car, but then went seamlessly on to describe the room the characters were in. But that could be just me.

Your first and last lines were very good. They made me think way too much :XD

I liked it. And I think the title's fine, as "proper" titles go ;)

January 1st, 2008 at 09:09pm