Somehow I came across the link to this story on Tumblr...and I swear this is the best Staalsy story I have read on mibba. The story was flawless and the ending was just perfect :) It was amazing.
This is perhaps one of the most well written stories I have ever had the pleasure to read on this site. The whole thing was beautifully crafted. Multi dimensional characters, original analogies and comparisons, interesting inner thoughts and dialogue. You even used correct spelling and grammar! Lol. It moved at nice even pace and you told us the story without adding unnecessary parts or leaving things out. A perfect ending, in my opinion. It was truly amazing! I'm so glad that I found this. :)
Write another story immediately PLEASE. This was excellent. Seriously top-notch and among the best I have seen on Mibba. I can't wait to see what comes next and I hope it's soon. Like tomorrow. Or now would be okay. Am I being needy?
I never want this story to end! It's so intense, in the most realistic way, and perfectly captures what most early-20s guys are like. You could start an advice column for them, since you seem to understand them so well.