Waiting Games - Comments

Did you read the original story that went along with it? >_>;
Also, I'll look at that... Didn't notice any spelling/grammar mistakes myself, but I could have missed one.
O_o;
It's not the colors. It's the picture. It just... doesn't sit right on some computers..

this was okay,
its not very original, but it is written well.
i only saw one or two grammar/spelling things that need to be fixed
try fixing the colors on this layout, it gets difficult to read on.