Toby - Comments

You are so goddamn good at this.

how did I ever not comment on the last chapter of this amazingness?
I feel like a total douchebomb now for being so rude,
I hope you're not ticked or anything! x:

i just wanted to cry as I read this though,
as all of your work is beautiful and heartbreaking and so original,
seriously you should win all of the author of the month contests
and just ldkslfsdlf.

and I hate to say that I actually grew to like Toby,
and the fact that Danny died just twisted me up into this huge mess,
and just you are a master of emotions, god I loved this.

I absolutely cannot WAIT for Marie (which is like, my favorite female name ever) and learn about this sister...

oh my god this ending makes me want to cry. i hate to see characters die. especially ones like Danny. oh god. there are tears in my eyes. i seriously love this layout though that you have going with the series of drabbles. it's genius. and beautiful. and heartbreaking all in one. i cannot wait for the next sequel? whatever it's called at this point lol. oh gosh. i just can't fucking get over this ending though. it's perfect and terrible all in one and i LIVE for heartbreak, so sue me for enjoying this a little bit in those dark places in my mind :p

:L

So fucking excited for Marie. I don't even know what to expect, but I'm excited anyways. Chapter five was great though, what a way to end this.

dfjkoaskdjfs, this was lovely. I’ve been paying genuine attention to everything he has to say, I’ve been smiling without realising, I’ve been kissing him spontaneously and returning the favour when he goes down on me... That bit was great. I'm really liking (and by liking I mean I think this is amazing because you know, first I thought Alfie was fantastic, and then Danny came along and now this and I can't fully fathom your writing) Toby and I'm anxious to see how the last chapter's going to go. <3

so italics, i'm guessing is dialogue and it's Toby's dialogue, right? so.... he's talking to someone about someone cheating. which leads me to believe Toby is talking to Danny? right. or he was talking to Danny. or maybe i'm totally off and i'm not even supposed to understand entirely until the next installment... :l but i fucking love your writing so i'll probably always over analyze it.

enter, Confusion...

This is brilliant, YOU'RE brilliant.

Oh, and I'd just like to mention my favourite bit from Toby's character description, Toby likes Kurt Vonnegut novels, Banksy, when his bedsheets make lines on his boyfriend's cheek and Cancer Bats.

this is amazing,
so descriptive and gut wrenching.
I really do like Toby,
through all of this rage issues.
the fact that he is so protective of his twin sister...
I can definitely relate.
There is nothing like the blinding anger I feel towards anyone
that hurts my twin brother. nothing. I will fucking end them.
I think you did a perfect job capturing that emotion. <3
"I could kick his teeth in of course, and leave him battered bruised and bleeding on the floor but bones heal, scars fade. You do not fuck with her and remain unscathed."
so, so brilliant.

this was wonderful!
thank you so much for updating. (:

ANDY IS HAPPY

:DDDDDDD

oh no! :x Toby sounds kind of scary...

um. i like Toby.
i don't even know
why. maybe just
because he's a
badass... and
brutally honest.
SO FUCKING
STOKED FOR
THIS SHIT....

oh poop.

I'm stoked. (:

GAHD.
You need to update this,
like,
now.

yes. yes. yes.