A New Life For The Abandoned Girl (Adopted by the Cullens) - Comments

Bluecaty15 (100)

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i love it!! Please update again soon!!!

March 31st, 2012 at 09:45pm

dancer101 (100)

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I love your story!!! please update!

January 20th, 2012 at 02:09am

blakkarma22 (100)

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dont give up on this story. its very good.

August 1st, 2011 at 04:56am

nayrreerg (100)

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i love it it is a good selling point because it includes twilight :)

July 18th, 2011 at 07:54am

HelpI'mAlive (100)

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Oh...It's good! There's a few mistakes. You should also put in more detail to their feelings and fix the errors. Otherwise, it's great. Keep on writing.

November 7th, 2010 at 04:51am

could we be a dream? (100)

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this is very good so far. a few spelling mistakes, but otherwise good. one thing i'd say is to try and make it a little longer and give detals about the dreams and the points of veiw!

(:

November 3rd, 2010 at 10:39pm

hazel eyes (100)

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awwww ^_^ write more soon please^_^

October 26th, 2010 at 03:37am

Fire and Ash. (100)

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Love It!! Update?!

:D :D :D :D

October 11th, 2010 at 09:51am

Trig-ger (100)

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its really good so far

September 11th, 2010 at 03:59am