Teenage Dream - Comments

Wonderful job. Absolutely fucking wonderful job on this one-shot. Especially since it was your first one ever. I absolutely LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! You know, you could have expanded the idea into a full blown story because it was a really well written piece. Just a thought....haha.

Gah this one-shot is amazing. I have tons of ideas in my brain if you ever need any.

Woot woot! I'm in love. I really liked it. :D The song, which I don't know... *should i know it?* was interesting. I love the lines and how you mixed them in so nicely. You started and went through it all so smoothly and beautifully. I really really loved it. :D

A fantastic one shot darling, <3

Wow. You weren't kidding when you said this one felt finished. =D I absolutely loved it! As the above comment states, it was really cute. =) I'm so glad they got together in the end, and everything just fits into place and seems realistic and...wow. This is amazing!

xoxo
HJ.

Love Love Love. That was really cute!!!

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP. :D
That was so freaking cute, girllllllllllllllll. Like, seriously. I read that and was like, smiling like an idiot by the end so bad. My dad thinks I'm a weirdo. o_o

I really like the layout and banner you have, too. (:

Also, your writing is brilliantttttttttt. And that one-shot was adorable. And I'm sort of frustrated that nobody else commented when they should have. I mean, seriously. It was well, written, had a good layout and banner, and was so CUTE. What the hell is not to like about it?

<3