A Beautiful Disaster. - Comments, page 33

In A City Of Fools (100)

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Ohmygod. That was the best fucking thing ever!
Update soon!

October 11th, 2010 at 03:39pm

heyJAYhey (100)

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oh my gosh, this is amazing!!!
seriously, it's so well written and original and fjdkslldksa
i love it.
please please update soon!!

October 11th, 2010 at 02:27pm

nyeh (100)

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Ooooh ;) *wink wink* LOllllll I love this :)

September 25th, 2010 at 11:03pm

shasti (100)

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FOR THE LOVE OF GOD PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY
FODKF;SKLDG'SFL;D;LKDS

September 25th, 2010 at 04:25pm

absinthe. (100)

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That was so funny! Really good.

September 13th, 2010 at 02:34am

Alvarittsixx (100)

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Dude, you're so detailed. <3
I like, I like. ;D
The end of the second chapter made me laugh so. Hard.
I really liked the first chapter. It was an intriguing introduction to Jack and Alex. It gave them motives to be the way they are in the present.
It's . . . Really good. <3

September 10th, 2010 at 08:47pm

CarynPikachau (100)

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nom!! you have to like update soon!!
*spaes and twitches* ill like, uhmmm
kidnap rian and not let him go and make him watch very gir;y programes like barbie while i hide *twitches*
update soon please XD x

September 9th, 2010 at 09:24pm

Alex Gaskarth (100)

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I like it a lot.
This is sounds good, looking forward to the next update:)

September 9th, 2010 at 07:44pm

absinthe. (100)

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A definite keep!

Yay, first comment. Seems like an interesting story!

September 9th, 2010 at 06:17am