Our Downfall - Comments

You captured in quick blips what might have happened and I like that. You have something going here. I see you wrote it as a one-shot but I see this more as an opener to a longer story that you can elaborate more on & insert more detail on. Yet it was very very good.

Ahhh I didn't even realize that I had already read your stuff, I want more D:

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JAzz <2+1

Ahhhh that was SUPER good, I think it captured exactly what many fans felt after the breakup. I loved it so much, it made me sorta sad, but in a way happy to. Thank you for writing this. I shall have to read more of your stuff!
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JAzz <2+1