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  • Criala

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    Wow, that was unexpected for the ending. was still kind of cute though. :)
    I really want an epilogue, if you guys end up writing one.
    I want to see more of these two! Grey and Vee are adorableeee together!
    Loved the story!! <3
    August 22nd, 2011 at 07:12am
  • Zeeke

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    Woah I was not expecting an ending there. This story is really short (for me) but it's great. you guys painted a nice picture with it, Matvey and Greyson are a cute couple. Though for a little Constructive Criticism you could of gone into more details with things, to sort of bulk it up and make more richer, ya know? or transitions, like where Macy finds out about Matvey's crush on Greyson you could of wrote a scene leading up to her finding out. I dunno, just my thoughts. Hope you don't mind :)
    August 14th, 2011 at 11:38am
  • polka dot perfection

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    update this!!!!!!!!!!!1
    August 14th, 2011 at 12:04am
  • JumpingInPuddles

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    so i'm extremely glad that i found this story when it was completed because i don't know if i would have been able to have the patience:) fricking amazing, stayed up all night reading it:)
    August 12th, 2011 at 09:36am
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    awww Grey you are too sweet.
    August 4th, 2011 at 01:13am
  • we are not amused;

    we are not amused; (100)

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    YESYESYES.
    intelligence, right here.
    i hardly care though, i love these two <3
    July 8th, 2011 at 04:01am
  • call me by your name

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    yay they're together!
    July 7th, 2011 at 10:17pm
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    hehehe!
    vee is so cute :3
    July 7th, 2011 at 10:14pm
  • we are not amused;

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    Too cute.
    It's just too cute.
    I love Vee and Grey so much.
    Updates always make me happy. (:
    July 6th, 2011 at 08:37pm
  • call me by your name

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    they kiss again! woo!
    but Vee is gonna remember right i mean it was only pot you don't lose your memory with only pot there would of had had to have been something else in there to make him forget
    update again soon please i really wanna know what happens
    July 6th, 2011 at 07:36pm
  • polka dot perfection

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    Loved the update!!!!
    I cant wait to see what grey says!!!!
    June 18th, 2011 at 03:56am
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    ohh.
    so wanna know what he replies.
    June 17th, 2011 at 10:20pm
  • call me by your name

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    they kiss!! yes!
    <3
    June 17th, 2011 at 07:27am
  • we are not amused;

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    I always smile when this is updated (:
    It's just so cute!
    Don't say it sucks just because it's short when it blatantly doesn't!
    I quite enjoyed it <3 Always take your time writing, everyone else can wait.
    June 17th, 2011 at 03:29am
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    omg finally!
    June 17th, 2011 at 01:53am
  • AdAyToReMeMbEr12

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    How do you only have 4 pages of comments! There should be like 40+ pages of them about how your story is so fucking amazing!!!!!!! Update pleaseee!!!!! :)
    May 30th, 2011 at 12:19am
  • polka dot perfection

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    awww poor vee:D
    i'm sure grey actually does love it!!!!!!!!!
    May 25th, 2011 at 08:11pm
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    awww :3
    May 24th, 2011 at 04:19am
  • ktxdd33

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    Interesting story! I looooooooove it! :D
    May 11th, 2011 at 02:21am
  • we are not amused;

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    Well that was just the most adorable thing ever.
    Have I told you how much I love this?
    A whole hell of a lot.
    April 16th, 2011 at 05:32am
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