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  • JamieJo

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    You are forgiven for the delay just because this chapter was so long and amazing! It really brought to life the darker side that most writers are too scared to write about or just don't know how to write about it. You do so superbly, the ending gave me chills. Absolutely amazing work and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
    May 25th, 2011 at 03:43am
  • HankieHead

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    omg, i swear this story is like a drug to me...every time i read it, i just want more..not that ive ever had drugs...but anyways, thats besides the point :)
    May 24th, 2011 at 09:59am
  • HankieHead

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    omgomgomg...just finished reading the 'prequel' and now this....ooo, its so good...i would jump up and down if i hadnt just had my operation...but anyways, update soon ;D
    May 20th, 2011 at 11:01am
  • Kittykins

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    effin awesome h8 to say this is better than lady gaga
    January 20th, 2011 at 05:02am
  • Divide the Joy

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    Haha I'm in school and couldn't resist
    puke theycut her ongue out how harsh.
    I would definately shut my mouth
    January 5th, 2011 at 03:49pm
  • JamieJo

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    Oh my goodness! I shuddered just thinking about that girl having her tongue cut out! I love that you thought of that though, very gruesome indeed. I'm curious to see what Christan is up to, I don't know if I should consider what he did as nice or not? haha

    Update soon!!! <3
    January 4th, 2011 at 03:09am
  • Thor

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    Wow
    Really gruesome *shivers*
    that was quite sick, great update xD
    Again, I cnt wait to see what happens to her
    January 4th, 2011 at 01:52am
  • Divide the Joy

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    I haven't commented in forever school has killed my urge to read or comment. So here it is. It's going good so far.
    December 29th, 2010 at 05:35pm
  • g234

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    update please!!!!!!!! ill give u some kool-aid!!!!! :)
    December 24th, 2010 at 02:32pm
  • Thor

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    This story is realllyy intrigueing!!
    Cnt wait for a updatteee
    amazing!
    December 6th, 2010 at 09:07pm
  • g234

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    haha wanker! thats funny lol
    November 10th, 2010 at 03:15am
  • Boron

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    I just read all of the chapters you have posted this morning and let me tell you, I'M HOOKED!
    I love this story and its still the first chapters!
    Update soon pretty please!
    October 31st, 2010 at 04:25pm
  • JamieJo

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    I could seriously imagine this happening in this day and age, possibly because I've just watched "Taken" haha.

    I love how you keep making me wonder what Christian is thinking, I'll think something at first but then I keep reading and I'm like "wait, what are his intentions???" And I love that about a story!

    I hope you have time to update soon :D
    October 31st, 2010 at 04:22pm
  • VampAngel77

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    Torture scene, huh? Well, I guess those are fun in a strange way lol.
    Anyway, you should definitely update again... like really really soon.
    I've probably said this before, but this is becoming one of my favorites to regularly read on here :D
    More soon???
    October 31st, 2010 at 02:00pm
  • JamieJo

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    I love how dark and real you made the last chapter to be, I love how you don't sugar coat things. I'm really curious to know what happens in the next chapter!

    Also, hope you are doing well :)
    October 21st, 2010 at 09:47pm
  • VampAngel77

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    Once again, another sad chapter! But, I absolutely loved it.
    This is probably one of my fav stories on here right now
    And, it's only a few chapters in, imagine how I'll feel when the stories progresses!!!
    More soon, please!
    October 21st, 2010 at 02:18pm
  • JamieJo

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    LOVE IT!
    Please update soon!
    October 12th, 2010 at 01:47am
  • VampAngel77

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    Another great update!!! Aw, they're fun time was interrupted *sad face* Even though she still ridiculously high. But, I don't like the new guy :O He sounds like a pig
    More soon???
    g234... I know me too!!! I haven't had time to even think about writing lately :(
    October 11th, 2010 at 02:38pm
  • g234

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    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!
    PLZ UPDATE!!!
    AND....i think that the master sounds pretty hot but kinda like creepy at the same time...hmm i likes it!!!!! :]
    and Vampangel77...I MISSED YOU!!!! :]]]]]
    October 11th, 2010 at 12:11am
  • VampAngel77

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    :O You mentioned me in the author's note!? Thanks :D
    Anyway, I don't know what to think about that guy. I mean, I hate him because he kidnapped her, is treating her like a slave, and drugging her. But, he seemed really gentle with her in the shower. Gah!!! Idk! Still think I hate him though cause of what he's doing.
    Great update!!
    More, pretty pleasee
    October 4th, 2010 at 09:11pm