A Gangsta's Girl - Comments

I'm so sorry I took forever to do this (you asked me to read and comment awhile back).
I usually don't read stories like this, but it's so well written and attention grabbing that I couldn't resist.
The characters are amazing, and you describe them so that I really can picture them in my mind, even without the pictures of clothes.
I still don't like pictures of clothes and rooms and such put into the story, but at the same time you still end up describing everything, so the pictures don't take away from anything, they're just kind of unnecessary.
I saw maybe two or three mistakes in spelling or grammar through out the entire nine chapters, but that happens to pretty much everyone, so don't worry.

All in all, the story is probably one of my favorites, the characters and settings are very believable, and the chapters are very well written and have me wanting more.

Subscribing : )

=) =D =P =} <3 <3 <3 !!!!!

=) =D =P =} <3 <3 <3 !!!!!

Wow you're actually making an effort to update this story.
I think Cocoa will stay with Murder and Daequaan seems like one of those "stick by your side" kind of friends.

So I'm guessing I'm this "friend" huh?
Anyway I think Murder is my fave character.
And...is her mama gonna beat her?

I love the story can't wait for you to update it

Only you would update 4 in the morning.
And next update is Christmas?! C'mon!
I got plans then!!!
Loved the update...really wish you could do it more often though.....

I love this <3
I definitely subcribed !
(:

i love this story.
it's really different than other stuff up here
i can't wait for the next chapter

Keep it up, girl. The people on this site are complete idiots if they don't see the beauty of a street novela. You gotta remember that most of them ARE white. xD.

Oh shiz!!!
I'm so happy I was on the phone with you when I read this...
I am so frickin happy that I remembered about this thing. And the Brenda song thing...really?
Anywayz I love this! Now I will update my story.

I'm loving it.

That don't make stories like this . . . keep it up:)

I love this story! It's so badass.
Can't wait for more!!

Stealing your story's comment virginity!!!
I lurve it!!!
Write more! And don't be lazy this time!!!