The Mantel and the Painting - Comments

I love the layout, and I love how you open it up with the part about eye color. I like your writing style, but I'm a bit confused about the whole story line, and how the title relates to the story. I did like it though. :)

I really love this story! It has so much description in it, so I could picture it perfectly. I think my favorite part in the story is "Adam thought he was being cute, acting the masculine role in their top-heavy relationship, by brushing some golden hair behind her ear." I just loved reading that. I ended up rereading it four times. I do wish that it was a bit longer, but this was amazing. :)

I loved this. So Much.

Wow. This was just breath taking. The description was just amazing. <3