I Need a Hero - Comments

It was sad, a little tragic, but I figured it would happen after Nick got caught. I'll kinda miss that character. I saw it all unfold in my head. Beautiful chapter.

Even though you did kill off Nick, and note, I did love him.. he was AWESOME!!! I still loved this chapter!!
Brenda and Johnny are still adorable!!!
And of course, Jared and Will are still amazing too... :)
Update soon!!!

I still like this even though there's no more Nick.
And yay, they're almost to freedom ^-^

Poor Nick...
You should kill the doctors and Rob? I think it is...
I remember it was a simple name... Rob...

NOOOO NICK!!!!!! BUT I LOVED HIMS!!!!!!!!

great update!! But if you ask me, Nick did the right thing xD
*Sobs Dramaticly* RIP Nick! You will be missed!

Why don't they just expose the place? There are probably a lot more innocent (or innocent enough to not deserve that treatment) people still there. Plus, if they were willing to kill more than once to protect their secret, there's no way they are going to let everyone else go without a fight.

Awwwww I was hoping that Nick would make it out of this but I guess not.
Nick is like a father figure toward all of them huh.
I was hoping that he would meet up with them and stay with them but I guess his heartless uncle haad other plans.
I hope karma bites him in the ass for killing his own brother and nephew!!!!!
The guys are almost free and they get to live without looking over their shoulder!
Nick will always be remembered!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

Loved it! I hope they go out and actually expose him, they need to because Knight probably wont let them escape, he's just a lying bastard.
xXx

xDD Nick is such a bad-ass!!! I love him, I hope nothing happens to him!!! AND I hope they make it out okay, and not get caught!!!!

I love Nick!! He's so cool!!
I hope he's okay though!!
I also hope that they get away!!
Update soon girl!!

Ncik is such a badass xD Those last two chapters were awesome

Well... You know that paragraph after that other paragraph that was before that paragraph???
Well... You kind of put... Nevermind it's not important
DON'T LET THEM GET CAUGHT!!!!!!!!!!

I really liked this chapter(: If you want I can proofread your chapters for this story so you dont have to. Justsayin.

YAY!! I just read all 18 chapters and I'm telling you now, this is one of the best stories I've read on here so far!
I just love the way it's written, and now that they're out of the looney bin, I cant wait to see what happens next! xD
Keep it up, and update soon please!!

YAY they finally escaped that nightmare place!
I was really worried that something might happen but they got of there safety.
But I am worried about Nick though, I wonder what will happen to him since he helped escaped, hopefully nothing to serious.
I can't wait for the next update and hope it'll be soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

I LOVE THIS. I'm really getting in Johnny stories lately! He's so cuuuute! :D
But I gotta say....Johnny needs more loving in this! Hopefully after they successfully escape and turn the freakos in?!?! :D He deserves a good girl! <3

I absolutely love this story.
I'm so glad they all got out, well, except for Nick. I hope he's okay.
And I hope they can all make it to safety and stay safe.

They have to make it out! They need to!
xXx

Wow every time I think about people escaping, I always think about Prison Break.
I love Jimmy, but he almost blew the whole thing for them, good thing Brenda thought of that (very embarrassing) excuse.
Great minds think a like: Jimmy and Brenda really know how to think together don't they.
Yay Nick is a life savior because he is going to help all them get out of that horrible place!
Indeed, Welcome to the Family Nick!
You should have more moments with Brenda and Johnny! XD
PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD