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  • Cheshire_Panda_Amy

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    I wasn't expecting positive feedback...and I certainly wasn't expecting ANY right away. Thanks very much.
    January 5th, 2008 at 07:04am
  • k i w i

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    this is really good.
    *thumbs up*
    January 5th, 2008 at 07:02am
  • Sheepy

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    This story has allowed me to look upon half an hour of story reading and feel accomplished in the task.

    So powerful, from start to end. Somehow more than astounding.

    For months I've cried. Miserable, wretched sobs that choke me. They rob me of my voice and breath. With each tear, my soul is emptied. The worst part? No one can even hear me...

    I am soothed by the twisted pleasure, that this slumber will be my last. Tomorrow I'll breathe no more.

    Those lines blew me away. Completely.

    Thank you so much for sharing your talent. Your story was perfect to me.
    January 5th, 2008 at 07:01am
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