Now We're Broken on the Floor - Comments

Your endings are just.... Arrrgggg!!! I love them but I hate them at the same time. They leave me completely excited for the next chapter but then I'm mad cuz you just stopped at the best part!!!
Hahaha! Gee calling out Mikey's name instead of Frank's while they were having intercourse- that's what the kids call it these days right...??

Holy. Balls. Of. Cheese.
I've cried so many times reading this.

Hehehe Gee called Mikey's name when he was screwing Frankie!!!!!
Normally, this would be sad, but at the moment Gerard has pissed me off to the point I'd like to shove a rusty hammer up his ass. So I choose to be amused by the name flub. :D

Poor Mikey!!!!!
Please keep up the amazing work for this story. You rock Killjoy!

I took careful note of how you so carefully dscribed Gerard's swollen face... that little fuck-face Frank had better not have hit him. I will kill a bitch if he did. -.-

Woah! Intense. I cannot wait to read more.

I bet Mikey just feels used.... =/
And Frank seem like a little b***h!

That made my life better. Frank is just so confident, I think I may enjoy his character.

Every story needs a good villain. :)

what game is frank playing?

Hahahah, I find this unbelievably entertaining. Gerard almost seems like the girl in this, which is very rare in Frerard or Waycest. It's quite an interesting concept and I very much enjoy the way you write it.

Subscribing and eagerly awaiting updates. :)

They were soo close... But Gerard is stubborn and wont let what he obviously wants to happen.
And I just had to laugh when Mikey tripped on the stairs because I had read a story right before this where someone tried to make a strong and dramatic exit but tripped and stumbled. I say that is a pretty cool coincidence.

awww poor mikes and gee a incest that can never happen

oh my gee! i cannot wait for another chapter. this was truly amazing. poor mikey, so in love. poor gee, so confused.

Haha! That ending threw me off a bit.... But it will definitely make for a very interesting next chapter. I dont see a situation where Gerard can play that off so it would be funny to see him try XD

holy shizzle my nizzle at last we know there body react the same way

Gerard just got caught caring about his little brother! Can't wait for the next update!

awww it's sweet how gee cares but frankie needs to be out of the picture,

omgomgomg what is Gerard gonna do??? I need to know!!! Soo cant wait for the next update! XD

i .need. an.update.

I really want to know what Gerard truly felt about that kiss... Gerards pov next chapter perhaps??? And poor Mikey, I dont think he will be able to handle Gerards toying much longer.

mikey needs to confront gerad instead of acting like a timid bunny...

Poor Mikey!! This story always makes me so sad. But in a good way.
Update soon please!