The Entertainer - Comments

To be completely honest, four years of French class and all I learned was how to use an online translator. I envy your writing, you're so fluid in your choice of words... Beautiful. This is the second time you've made me fall in love with your characterizations of the two. Well done, thank you.

Oh my god. This was amazing//beautiful//fantastic. Ugh, I don't even know what to say. For some reason, the entire thing makes me want to cry. You are such a lovely writer, and you honestly couldn't have ended it better than you did. The entire thing flowed, and it was never chopppy, or
awkward. I'm kind of in awe, so I'm just going to go ahead and end this comment now.

I Love it.. I think you should write a story..it would be Epic! <3

Yayyyy!
I liked this, very much so. It was just so light, and it flowed so well. Beautiful. (I'm afraid I don't know any French to help correct anything wrong, but the commenter above seems to know what she's talking about. :] )
I'm quite a fan of the picture you used in the layout as well, may I ask where you found it?

Votre français est bon :) Though 'Vous ne pouvez pas le faire' means 'you cannot do it', it's essentially the same thing. The French language doesn't have conjunctions like we do and everything translates roughly