I can't believe her stepdad hit her :O What a jerk!!! But I'm really lovin her and Jimmy tho! Their just so cute =) I also really love your banner! It's amazing! Keep up the awesome work! Update soon :)
hahah aw! I love you tooooo! I so love this chapter, just cuz of jimmy. If she would tell jimmy then he would beat the everloving shit out of that douchefucker. Johnny's adorable too! Her moms just as much a bitch as her step dad. I think she should run away with jimmy, or get her real dad to take her. :}
This is story makes me so freaking warm inside. I luff jimmy sooooooooo freaking much! Also warmness on the soul was a nice touch. BUT i did notice when you said zacky looked at them and then looked down. o.0 whats going on there eh?! :D more soon!
and lol at your clock. it needs to sleep for a few years.
awwwww this story is soooo flippin sweet. i love jimmy so much. i hope it stays that way. oh and if you'd like some help with your links so people can just click on them, just type [ url= then put the url here ] and [ /url ] no spaces though I just had to so you could see it [:
omg dude i was so fucken giddy the whole time i read it....my favorite part was when they were making sand castles and laid down to block the water!! omg i laughed so fucken hard!! great story!!
I loved it, it was very touching and sweet and I dunno but it touched me [pervertedly I think I may sue] but I dont know if thats the end, or if your still going with it, so I will say update soon :]
hahahah favorite line "do you want to get wet?" such a jimmy thing to say. Im sorry, i know it was meant to be romantic and such but hahahah omg i laughed. :p i did love the chapter though. Can't wait for more.
im totally foreshadowing some sexy time, and then something bads gonna happen. maybe not exactly bad for them, well, depending, idk lol, i just think that its gonna happen. o.0
Another wonderful update! I loved it when her mom called. I've had that happen before, haha.. Anywho.. I understand where your coming from to about needing ideas.. I've been havin' a hard time with my stories lately too :| But as an idea for your next chapter maybe Jimmy could take Car on like some romantic type date and maybe she could finally tell him she loves him or something along those lines? Just an idea. Hopefully it might help a little bit :) Keep up the great work!