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  • AliceHumanSacrifice.

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    So I basically devoured these two chapters.
    This concept is so great and different.
    I'm completely in love with it!<3
    In the second chapter when McKenna said that Brian didn't like her I felt so sad, it really got to me :(
    I really want to know what's going to happen!
    Please update soon XD
    February 10th, 2011 at 03:20am
  • riellybabie101

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    'Brian doesn't like you." so blunt. I love it haha.
    February 5th, 2011 at 04:05am
  • A7X-Gc-luver

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    LOL! gotta love kids
    cant wait for more
    amazing chapter
    February 3rd, 2011 at 06:48am
  • AnnieArchie

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    LMFAO, I love how she says "Brian doesn't like you" then runs off, love love love!
    More please <3
    February 2nd, 2011 at 01:40am
  • frighteningfeline

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    I..I.. I think I love you. I love how you started this story, can't wait for the next chapter!
    February 1st, 2011 at 07:47pm
  • xoxoxomgw

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    Wowww this is so exciting! *rubs hand in glee* can't wait for the next chapter! I know i'll love this story already!
    February 1st, 2011 at 08:19am
  • HailMisery

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    She stood up for herself that's a plus and well Kenna was brutally honest with her :)
    February 1st, 2011 at 06:10am
  • i_love_to_syn

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    Dude, what the fuck does Haner have stuck up his ass? I have half a mind to shove up there just a bit higher, and then yank it out.
    Anywhoo, mindless violence aside, I quite like this story. In fact, I like it so much that I love it :) Great work, deary!
    January 31st, 2011 at 11:09pm
  • Red Riding Hoodie

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    Haha. I love McKenna.

    "He doesn't like you."

    Hilarious.

    Can't wait for more!

    xoxo
    January 31st, 2011 at 08:12pm
  • Music...and...Poetry

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    Hahaha that was so cute and awesome!
    I loved it!
    Update again soon please!
    January 31st, 2011 at 11:29am
  • XtremeFairy

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    I love the chapter xD
    January 31st, 2011 at 06:17am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Well then lol
    Loved the update! <3
    January 31st, 2011 at 04:55am
  • ChristinaZomby

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    Finally Biotch, you put it up.
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    McKenna seemed a little creepy when she said that Brian didn't like Mallory.
    Update:D
    January 31st, 2011 at 03:05am
  • ForeverPlagued

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    The last part really made me giggle because McKenna was just all..."Brian doesn't like you." like it was nothing haha. Loved the chapter though. More soon, please?
    January 31st, 2011 at 02:41am
  • heartracin

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    this is sooo good hope you can update soon!
    January 31st, 2011 at 02:05am
  • destroy.better

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    My god, I love how you write. Although the story concept is over done, I actually enjoy it and shockingly I'm not cringing at cliches like I do on most stories. It might be the characters; they seem very realistic without being boring. I can not wait until you update again.
    January 31st, 2011 at 01:38am
  • cat-vengeance

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    lovee it!
    i cant wait to see what happens
    lol love the name for brian it made me laugh :)
    January 31st, 2011 at 12:33am
  • graceful swans;

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    This is so awesome. Update soon and I just might forgive you for taking so long last time. :)
    January 31st, 2011 at 12:15am
  • rahrah4343

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    I love how she said "Brian doesnt like you" without a care in the world. It was great.
    January 30th, 2011 at 11:56pm
  • winter soldier

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    “Brian doesn’t like you,” she informed me, and flounced into her room.

    By far one of my favorite lines that I have ever read. And it's mostly because I can see an eight year old doing exactly that. Can't wait to read more!<3
    January 30th, 2011 at 10:31pm