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  • WonderfullyKaylee

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    Oh My God. oh my god. ohmygodohmygodohmygodomigodomigod!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dakota is DEAD?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!? No. It.. No. You wouldn't do this to me!! You wouldn't!!! HOW COULD YOU?!!?!??!!? AH! There is no emoticon in the world that can express what I'm feeling right now! I feel hurt and betrayed. You are so mean. :'(
    June 29th, 2011 at 06:59pm
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    wow thats super crazy. does that mena dakota died? i hope not
    i hate sad stories
    although this one is very good so update:)
    June 29th, 2011 at 10:08am
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    :[...
    June 29th, 2011 at 08:12am
  • SmallWonders

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    Oh my God....
    the last part was so emotional. i started to cry!
    June 29th, 2011 at 04:12am
  • LIONXiiaX3

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    Omg nooooooooooo!~ please don't let him die!! My eyes are all watery already D: Next chapter pleaseeeeeeee~
    June 28th, 2011 at 06:54pm
  • toninator123

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    he has to live. by the way i really like the story and that better not have been the end
    June 28th, 2011 at 06:44am
  • all time blow;

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    nononononononononononononononono NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!

    he just -- he can't die!!

    He has to live okay?!?

    kay thanks.
    June 27th, 2011 at 09:20pm
  • Flying Flawed

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    He can't be dead!
    I'm like about to start crying!
    Please tell me he's okay!
    June 27th, 2011 at 09:16pm
  • lolitta013

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    i didnt much like your last chapter (26) something about the contents was lacking ... the rest of them though are really quite good!
    June 27th, 2011 at 08:56pm
  • theword4live

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    Nononononononono!!!! D: Dakota can't be dead!:(
    June 27th, 2011 at 07:41pm
  • Nytestalker

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    Wait. Is Dakota seriously dead??
    Nonononono. Not acceptable.
    June 27th, 2011 at 07:17pm
  • A S K I N G .

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    No. no nononnoonononon.
    Psh he's not dead!
    He's not dead!
    Close call right?
    He's not dead?
    RIGHT?!?!?
    T^T
    June 27th, 2011 at 06:59pm
  • Broken_Elli

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    Ahhhhhhh!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! :3 MORE PLEASE :D ~*~
    June 23rd, 2011 at 08:46pm
  • O.o?

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    NOOOOOOOO!! You cannot leave us like this!!! Dakota is being silly, not talking to Rider! They need to get back together, 'cause it makes then both happier and into better people.
    June 21st, 2011 at 09:07pm
  • starbella

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    I'm going to trow a temper tantrum if you don't update xD
    June 21st, 2011 at 12:48am
  • Flying Flawed

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    You're gonna make things happy again ... right??
    It's really good but I really don't want him to die
    can't wait for more
    June 13th, 2011 at 06:13am
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    thats chapter was really good:)
    sad dakota did that but well see what happens
    hes so adorable and innocent. Riders a dick
    anyways kinda ranting
    just know i want to read more andi think you need to update. and soon:)
    June 11th, 2011 at 03:59pm
  • x!T4L!4NxG!RLx

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    noooo please please please update, you can't leave me hanging like this!!!!! HE CAN'T DIEEEEE!!!!! D=
    June 11th, 2011 at 11:42am
  • XxArcherxX

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    aww,my eyes are all watery =[ it's so sad but a great story line
    June 11th, 2011 at 04:04am
  • SmallWonders

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    Shit
    June 11th, 2011 at 03:13am
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