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  • BoysAreHeartBreakers

    BoysAreHeartBreakers (100)

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    I loved the use of spanish. The way you've written it with the flash backs. I love that it's slightly sad.
    February 28th, 2011 at 02:05am
  • the end has no end;

    the end has no end; (100)

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    I loved how every now and then some words would be in spanish lol I really loved this, it was sad and beautiful...
    November 11th, 2010 at 10:07am
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