I'll Be the Wings That Keeps Your Heart in the Clouds - Comments

  • user4536213

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    Sorry it took so long to comment,
    But anyways AWESOME! I'm liking the way this is going.
    Can't wait for next update!
    January 24th, 2011 at 01:16am
  • isles and glaciers

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    Awh D: Poor everyone. I'm having an internal pitty party for everyone right now.
    They need to stop being all miserable and just talk everything out.
    January 20th, 2011 at 07:56am
  • repeating ap0ligies.

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    Aww</3 :'( Poor Jake!
    January 20th, 2011 at 12:51am
  • taishabeth

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    Love this.
    Update soon, please?
    January 19th, 2011 at 01:46am
  • isles and glaciers

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    Aww D: Derek and Alex need to stop. Right now. ASAP.
    And Derek and Jason need to start ;D
    And David still needs some sweet lovin. Just throwing that out there again >.>
    January 18th, 2011 at 09:22am
  • O.o?

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    Poor darling... They better get back together soon, or I'm going to be sad :(
    January 18th, 2011 at 04:29am
  • reemmeeyy

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    i dont know if you understand that i am literally in love with this story. jsut saying.
    LOVED the update. poor jason D': i feel so bad for him. and for derek actually. althought i can't figure out really what he's thinking. but i hope he still loves jason as much as he loves derek.
    January 17th, 2011 at 11:02pm
  • Hunt The Haunted

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    I feel really sorry for Jason. But it was great putting this one up in Jason's point of view as well!
    January 17th, 2011 at 09:26pm
  • user4536213

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    This is pretty awesime :) cant wait for next update!!
    January 8th, 2011 at 03:10am
  • O.o?

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    AWWWN POOR BABY! Poor babIES! They're all just so... sad... and unrequited love-y. It's sad. Poor Jason and Jake. Why you hatin' on the J names?

    Anyways, me likey. Me likey mucho. Update soon, please!
    January 6th, 2011 at 06:56am
  • reemmeeyy

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    i know i already commented, but i kinda read the whole story AGAIN.
    andi think you should update :D like now.
    p.s did the remembering sunday part have anything to do with my dream? just curious :)
    January 5th, 2011 at 07:02pm
  • Hunt The Haunted

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    Awww, I made a very unmasculine noise when Jason started singing too.

    Oh and you know waffles are they eaten for breakfast in America? cause in Scotland waffles are made from patatoes and eaten with egg.(Just so you know I spent have my time reading this figuring out why you would put chocolate chips into waffled, I'm not going to survive in this world.)
    January 2nd, 2011 at 06:11pm
  • reemmeeyy

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    amazing :)
    i love long chapters.and i love derek oh so much.
    January 2nd, 2011 at 05:48pm
  • isles and glaciers

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    Alex and Derek totally don't work. It's just.. not right. IT MUST END! o.o
    January 2nd, 2011 at 09:31am
  • JamieAllOver

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    I like the story because I absolutely love Mayday, but they like like each other right? LOLOL. I find that the slightest disturbing considering I find all of the band members attractive. It's odd to think about. :P Update soon!
    January 2nd, 2011 at 06:18am
  • heartsandcrosses

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    i love this story so far :)) write more soon!!
    December 28th, 2010 at 04:53am
  • user4536213

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    Dudeee I can't find the number in the bushes :( fuuuck
    Anyways great chapter! I'm loving Brooks and Kyle! Haha "you are a fruit loop"
    I don't know why that made me laugh so much XD
    Update this again soon! BTW thanks so much for updating this frequently!
    Happy holidays! Hope you get everything on Ur wishlist!
    December 24th, 2010 at 02:47am
  • isles and glaciers

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    Oh how I love this story :3
    But I watched an interview yesterday with Artist Vs. Poet where Joe (Guitarist Joe, not drummer Joe) said he lost his phone and they found it under the mattress on BC's bus. Which totally got me thinking about Joe and David.
    I dunno, just a suggestion. I can find the interview if you want, it was really funny.
    But yea, I love all the arguing, it's so weird and funny at the same time.
    December 24th, 2010 at 02:22am
  • I Cave In

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    I love David’s too good timing, although he should knock before entering a room, y’know, just in case....
    December 17th, 2010 at 04:53pm
  • isles and glaciers

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    You have no idea how much I laughed at the A/N.
    But that was awesome. I never thought about Brooks and Kyle before but they actually go well together. I think David should be gettin some lovin too though. Cause, ya know, he's totally adorable! :3
    December 16th, 2010 at 01:24am