Today for Me, Tomorrow for You - Comments

  • life is a lie....

    life is a lie.... (100)

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    This was so unbelievably beautiful. You took something as gorgeous as rent and added to it. Bravo!
    September 13th, 2012 at 10:40pm
  • wicked ways

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    This is so full of emotion in a really short amount of words. Wow, that's just, wow. So touching. I almost cried. D: Beautifully written. <3
    November 2nd, 2010 at 10:19pm
  • silk tea.

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    I haven't seen Rent in forever. And now you're making me want to watch it again. Angel was the most memorable character to me--I literally don't remember anyone's name but his. And it was so sad when he died. I really--really love the way you wrote his death, I feel like it honored him...you know?
    November 2nd, 2010 at 08:11pm
  • Abbi-Girl Ellen

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    this is fantastic - had to me grasping onto to each word
    and the ending was heartbreaking
    like Alexander Bernadotte i have to admit I don't kno who Angel and Collins are but still this story was powerfull and heartbreaking enough that is didn't matter.
    October 31st, 2010 at 11:21pm
  • fascination.

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    I like the layout, its very pretty, and the purple matches with the blue in a good way. He's hot as in he's sick, not that hes attractive, right? Not to be rude, but I think God should be capatilized (wow failed at spelling there huh?). This is sad, his love is dieing, this is like his boyfriend right? Oh my gosh, he dies, this is so sad! You did a wonderful job with the man's emotions in such a little space, wonderful job.
    October 31st, 2010 at 04:36pm
  • alexander bernadotte

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    Oh, my gosh, what...?! He died?! I have no idea who Angel and Collins are, but this broke my heart completely. I actually started crying when I read this: It’s the remnants of the strength used to fight something that would always win in the end. Oh my God, it's so sad D:
    But it was also beautifully written. So much said in so little words <3
    October 30th, 2010 at 11:32pm
  • The Walrus

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    Awww. :(
    Angel and Collins are just... <3
    And don't worry, Collins, you have Mark and Roger and Mimi and Joanne and Maureen for you. Angel did too, but you were the one that should've been there.

    Beautifully written. I adored it. :)
    October 30th, 2010 at 03:44pm