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  • kristenmichelle

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    The first chapter feels more like a summary to me. It's very mysterious how you never say who "she" is. I like your writing style and theme. The description is consistent with the photo. Nice job!

    Kristen :)
    July 3rd, 2012 at 12:46pm
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