Of Love or Lust - Comments

I was a little confused with the start, but was soon drawn into the plot. The way you've used adjectives to aid your writing has been really well done. I applaud you on it. I really don't have a clue as to who you've decided to write about.

This is a great story! Well detailed and well written - very descriptive. I started just reading but the beginning pulled me in it makes me curious as to what is going to happen! Really Great job, keep it up!

I like it. The only thing is that the layout makes the word font a bit hard to read... Good Story!

I like this story, I'm thinking that the band that is featured in this story would be All time low. No idea why but it seems like this has something to do with them, um the two guys that were mentioned so far I think would be Rian and Alex. no idea but this seems like an interesting story (:

Okay, well, I have no idea what's going on but the writing is good. :) I'm somewhat interested. I'm going to guess that the boys are the TH boys because we both like TH but I might be wrong. XD

:) Loveddd itt!