His Lips. - Comments

that was sposed to be bumfucking, not bunfucking.
LOL.

dude, your fucking good.
ive read this like 10 times in the past 6 months and have decided you proper have talent, unlike 99% of people who just write about gerard bunfucking whoever happens to cross his path (though we all love it)

anyway, fuckin good.
ya sexy genius.

That was like, really good.
I'm not even kidding.
The emotion was so real, I could feel pain, but... I don't know what of.
That makes it so much better.

You've got talent, keep it up.

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