Believe the Words That I Don't Want Me Around - Comments

Okay I really feel that this story doesn't have enough comments! The first chapter sets a good tone to this story; Jimmy and his stallion duck make me want to cry. Oh my gosh! How could val do that? Haha oh poor Zacky for having to walk in on them! This is really good!

i'd join, lol

I WANNA JOIN! I WANNA JOIN!

Okay well the first 4 chapters were okay, the 5th chapter was my fav lol, Um the layout it kind of hard to read and all the underlining and bold text it's really needed. I think you would have been just fine without it, but other then that it was a good story. I saw I think two spelling mistakes so no major loss there. I love how zack kind of comes out of nowhere at the end, that made me laugh.

all in all i say nice job!